Reviewing Writing

1-day course for reviewers, in person or online

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Colleen Trolove

What it’s about

Is a big part of your work reviewing other people’s writing?

  • Do you peer review for your team members?

  • Do you sign off your team’s reports?

  • Do you okay documents that go to the executive team, board, or minister?

This is the course for you.

You’ll learn what ‘good writing’ looks like

You’ll see how a reader-focused approach is different from traditional writing. Structure, language, and design can work together to make any text quicker and easier to read.

You’ll clarify your role in the document-production process

You’ll make everyone’s lives easier by giving early feedback about coherence, accuracy, and ease of understanding.

This is not a course about proofreading!

Proofreading needs to be done, but probably not by you. Effective reviewers don’t get sidetracked by missing commas.

You’ll practise giving useful, actionable feedback

You’ll give feedback that’s easy to act on and builds the confidence and ability of your writers.

What the training covers

Reader-centric tools

  • Focus on the reader for success

  • Putting yourself in the readers’ shoes

  • What all readers want to know

  • Bottom line up front

Plain language

  • What is plain language?

  • Who uses it?

  • Why use it? (the benefits)

The three pillars of reader-focused writing

  • Top-heavy structure

  • Speakable language

  • Skimmable layout

The document production process

  • Where you fit in the big picture

  • What’s your job as a reviewer – and what isn’t

Toeing the line

  • Align your feedback with your organisation’s style guide

  • Link feedback on tone to your organisation’s values

A method for assessing the quality of writing

  • Get clear on the goal and readers

  • Assess overall flow and logic

  • Do a quick visual scan

  • Assess the writing itself

How to give useful feedback

  • Give feedback that someone can act on

  • Give positive feedback without sounding fake

  • The goldilocks zone – not too much feedback; not too little

The specifics

Who’s it for?

Up to 14 people who review other people’s writing at work

How long?

1 full day at your venue

How much?

All trainings are $8,000 + gst per day plus travel

What format?

In person or online, but not a mix of both

Before the training

You can give me document samples to use in the training (optional)

To bring on the day

  • Laptops

  • A document to review

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