Write Better Emails

1-day course, in person or online

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Colleen Trolove

Why it matters

Sick of emails?

  • Sick of wasting time chasing up unanswered emails?

  • Sick of explaining over the phone things you already said in an email?

  • Sick of long, drawn out back-and-forths where people keep asking questions you’ve already answered?

Some of us spend 75% of our workday emailing!

It’s usually an incredibly inefficient use of our time.

Let’s reclaim our email power

Following some simple principles to structure an email can mean your emails actually get read!

  • Get your key messages across almost instantly

  • Get quick responses

  • Get the answers and actions you’re looking for

Ultimately, SAVE YOURSELF TIME!

People will love working with you

You’ll get a reputation for being efficient, easy to work with, and friendly but no nonsense.

What the training covers

Focusing on the readers

  • Put yourself in the readers’ shoes

  • What all readers want to see in emails

  • Bottom line up front

Subject lines that grab attention

  • Tune into your readers’ key questions

  • Use those questions to get your email opened

The extraordinary email formula

  • A way to emphasise messages and actions, as well as be a nice human

  • The power of headings and bullets to be direct but not blunt

  • Practise, practise, practise!

The subtleties of tone

  • What is tone?

  • The tone spectrum

  • How to create a genuine, human tone

Current trends in business writing

  • What is plain language?

  • Practical

  • Personal

  • Pared back

  • Positive

Email etiquette

  • What’s okay

  • What’s not okay

  • What’s annoying as hell

The specifics

Who’s it for?

Up to 14 people who write emails at work

How long?

1 full day at your venue

How much?

All trainings are $8,000 + gst per day plus travel

What format?

In person or online, but not a mix of both

Before the training

You can give me email samples to use in the training (optional)

To bring on the day

  • Laptops

  • Your own emails to work on

Colleen Trolove

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